Hi Holly, I am a big fan of your product! I think that your pitch had great delivery and vocal inflection. I also liked how you started with a relatable scenario to illustrate the need your product addresses. You can make your pitch even stronger if you adjust the camera angle slightly so that the ceiling is not as visible in the shot and the audience can focus more on you. Thanks for sharing! Karla Cejas
Hello Holly! You caught my attention when you set the scene of the storm. This allows listeners to put themselves in that place and think about how useful your product will be at that time. I think that it was a great idea that you were showing how long the straps were, so people like me that do not own an Eno can see how long it is and how it could be a hassle. Great pitch!
I really liked this video and it is very clear how much effort you put into making this. Starting the video off by discussing a situation that effects just about any eno/hammock user and then mentioned how quickly that could be fixed with your idea. The use of props was also very clever and added a visual component that made this pitch even more interesting.
Hi Holly,
ReplyDeleteI am a big fan of your product! I think that your pitch had great delivery and vocal inflection. I also liked how you started with a relatable scenario to illustrate the need your product addresses. You can make your pitch even stronger if you adjust the camera angle slightly so that the ceiling is not as visible in the shot and the audience can focus more on you. Thanks for sharing!
Karla Cejas
Hello Holly! You caught my attention when you set the scene of the storm. This allows listeners to put themselves in that place and think about how useful your product will be at that time. I think that it was a great idea that you were showing how long the straps were, so people like me that do not own an Eno can see how long it is and how it could be a hassle. Great pitch!
ReplyDeleteHey Holly,
ReplyDeleteI really liked this video and it is very clear how much effort you put into making this. Starting the video off by discussing a situation that effects just about any eno/hammock user and then mentioned how quickly that could be fixed with your idea. The use of props was also very clever and added a visual component that made this pitch even more interesting.